Wk1; KoNEkt Vs jos1

[Orc.]

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Topic - Silent Screams.

[Jos1]

hey hey hey, 30-60 lines? no ones going to vote no a novel lol

[Orc.]

Then write 20.

[KonEkt]

in whats up wit it

[Jos1]

.....

im silently screaming as im vilolently bleeding
must remain quiet and find the debriefing
timely im reading while my time-free's decreasing
night vision is fixed, i can finally see things
this crime spree's defeating with the nickel n dime fee's depleting
my hearts awake but soon my mind will be sleeping
someones behind me just creeping a kindly weak being
his death reminds me of this crying deep feeling
screaming, i must figure out the master of this disaster
i must know their next plans before im captured witht his rapture
after with his factors of this faggot actors futurama
prevent screams of 'momma momma' from this osama drama 12
help relieve america of this burden
change it from rural to urban and rip off those fucking turbans
documents have been scanned, now i sit back and wait
prepare myself so im ready to assasinate
but the fact remains, one dead terrorist wont stop terrorism
but a dead terrorist will increase the fear within them
i prepare the venom, barely awake my eyes are now weak
my only chance to start their demise and defeat
energy's life has decreased, i need to sleep
sleep for an a coma
cant smell aromas
cant feel my body
cant heal the rotting
cant pervail
body is frail
its over, i failed




ill vote when everythingsup

[Jos1]

you pussy