Khameli-N Vs illadel215 (3-4)

[Khameli-N]

6 bars
house rules
due sunday

3V KO
5V TKO

heres my links n verse + explanations n shit

http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/showthread.php?t=59976
http://www.rapworlds.com/forums/show...529#post722529

My 'Thesis' is: How can this kid 'cut it' when he couldn't get a grip~on~a~'Blade'?
He checked my shit, he 'fell' for it, cos he drooled so much he slipped~on~the~stage//1

When I came, he had two'L's' from when people 'Laughed~and~Left~him'
So the only thing he gets for causing 'static' with me will be a 'bad~reception'// 2

This shit was obvious from the start and everybody must know
He can't 'bring change' to the result of this battle, he came to 'take notes'// 3

Hows he gon' direct anything at me, I say that y'all should know~that
My 'profiles blank', but his girl said he had trouble 'getting Personal' befo'~that'// 4

You think you're safe battling online, well heres what I'm gonna do
Watch carefully as I make my 'internet-diss-connect' and still 'IP on you'// 5

Feeling the pressure? Then leave, go someplace where ur not hated
Try 'stand-up comedy' kid cos, thats where 'jokes' are appreciated// 6

Explanations:

he lost to bladed thesis ...he has 2 Loses(Ls)...hes gonna hav a hard time gettin personals on me cos i got jack shit in my profile

dont vote if u dont understand the wordplay and the punches...waitin 4 his verse

[illadel215]

ayoo homez i jus got home from NY been there all weekend n im bout ta go 2 bed lemme drop 2morrow homez ight yo........

[Khameli-N]

aight

[illadel215]

uppercuts ~break ya spine~ muh raw knuckles ~scrape ya mind~ this
kid iz a ~waste of time~ i'm not diddy but i can surely ~downplay ya shyne~//

I'm ill nothing but ~bones N famine~ like alexander i run this shyt ~known to manage~
combat ready ~prone to damage~ sickening how i don't spit bars i jus *hawk lines* like seattle ~home advantage~//

kid u ~hardly fresh~ my spitz be hot like ~marleys breath~
Like da Mtv show ~sorry next~ cuz ya style couldn't be phat if u had chris ~farleys chest~//

I'm a hustla some say i ~handle well~ i'm direct wit the heat u'd think i ~channel hell~
my *steel*leave you wit ~dismantled health~ leave u in misery after u caught more bullets then ~Randel EL~//

step to me and u bound to get ~murked dude~ Like 6 second abs i easily ~work you~
i'm above you on another level my elevation peaks will turn u ~purple~//

Hope y'all dont gas his shit cuz yo, I'll get a ~couple a' laughs~
This dude’s retarded, he'd get writers block ~doin auto-graphs~//

[illadel215]

jus looked round 4 links but theres no battles that need votes so ill get um wen there is

[Khameli-N]

nice verse...uppin 4 votes

[LyRiCs_GrApHiCs]

Punches: Kha
Metas: kha
Neutrons: Kha
Best Display: Kha
Structure: Kha
Flow/Wording: kha
Multies: tie
Personals: Ill
Ova all vote: khameli

Breakdown: i felt this was one sided cause illedel just didnt have good enough lyricz in this battle. khar, nice verse.

[TwoFacedKilla]

Yea pretty much da same thing as lyricz graphicz overall:khameli

[Pariah Liberal]

My 'Thesis' is: How can this kid 'cut it' when he couldn't get a grip~on~a~'Blade'?
He checked my shit, he 'fell' for it, cos he drooled so much he slipped~on~the~stage//1
no

When I came, he had two'L's' from when people 'Laughed~and~Left~him'
So the only thing he gets for causing 'static' with me will be a 'bad~reception'// 2
needed to be worded to be a lot better

This shit was obvious from the start and everybody must know
He can't 'bring change' to the result of this battle, he came to 'take notes'// 3
lol

Hows he gon' direct anything at me, I say that y'all should know~that
My 'profiles blank', but his girl said he had trouble 'getting Personal' befo'~that'// 4
no

You think you're safe battling online, well heres what I'm gonna do
Watch carefully as I make my 'internet-diss-connect' and still 'IP on you'// 5
haha still neded worded better

Feeling the pressure? Then leave, go someplace where ur not hated
Try 'stand-up comedy' kid cos, thats where 'jokes' are appreciated// 6
nice

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uppercuts ~break ya spine~ muh raw knuckles ~scrape ya mind~ this
kid iz a ~waste of time~ i'm not diddy but i can surely ~downplay ya shyne~//
iight

I'm ill nothing but ~bones N famine~ like alexander i run this shyt ~known to manage~
combat ready ~prone to damage~ sickening how i don't spit bars i jus *hawk lines* like seattle ~home advantage~//
nice coulda been worded better

kid u ~hardly fresh~ my spitz be hot like ~marleys breath~
Like da Mtv show ~sorry next~ cuz ya style couldn't be phat if u had chris ~farleys chest~//
naw

I'm a hustla some say i ~handle well~ i'm direct wit the heat u'd think i ~channel hell~
my *steel*leave you wit ~dismantled health~ leave u in misery after u caught more bullets then ~Randel EL~//
nice ish

step to me and u bound to get ~murked dude~ Like 6 second abs i easily ~work you~
i'm above you on another level my elevation peaks will turn u ~purple~//
naw

Hope y'all dont gas his shit cuz yo, I'll get a ~couple a' laughs~
This dude’s retarded, he'd get writers block ~doin auto-graphs~//
funny but no

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Vote- Illadell

[illadel215]

TwoFacedKilla vote dont count u gotta explain better then that

1-1....uppin